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~NEW MEUser is Offline

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10/19/2010 2:03 PM  
She will be a very lucky women.
Clockwork*User is Offline

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10/19/2010 3:31 PM  
yeah if i ever get married....
"They told me 'Son, you're special... You were born to do great things.' Well you know what...? They were right..." - Jack *Bioschock 1*

I sit in this chair in awe of how you have this effect on me. It's as if I went to a pharmicist and they handed me you. When I smell you I become intoxicated by your narcotic aroma. I am addicted to you as if you were some specialized nicotine. I swallow your gaze like ecstasy. Please sedate me and do what you wish; never cease to be my personal prescribed heroin...

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~NEW MEUser is Offline

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10/19/2010 6:06 PM  
MAybe you will one day. Trust God he will show you who it is, and she will love you the way you deserve. And it will last forever.
Clockwork*User is Offline

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10/20/2010 3:55 PM  
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"They told me 'Son, you're special... You were born to do great things.' Well you know what...? They were right..." - Jack *Bioschock 1*

I sit in this chair in awe of how you have this effect on me. It's as if I went to a pharmicist and they handed me you. When I smell you I become intoxicated by your narcotic aroma. I am addicted to you as if you were some specialized nicotine. I swallow your gaze like ecstasy. Please sedate me and do what you wish; never cease to be my personal prescribed heroin...

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dc_88keys4christUser is Offline

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01/09/2011 4:21 AM  
well, I wrote a song to my future husband... It was in March, so almost a year ago. It encouraged me to wait, so I guess it can be healthy, in a proper setting, at least.
Clockwork*User is Offline

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01/09/2011 9:31 AM  
Thats awesome Darcie. I know he will appreciate it very much.
"They told me 'Son, you're special... You were born to do great things.' Well you know what...? They were right..." - Jack *Bioschock 1*

I sit in this chair in awe of how you have this effect on me. It's as if I went to a pharmicist and they handed me you. When I smell you I become intoxicated by your narcotic aroma. I am addicted to you as if you were some specialized nicotine. I swallow your gaze like ecstasy. Please sedate me and do what you wish; never cease to be my personal prescribed heroin...

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Daughter_of_the_KingUser is Offline

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01/09/2011 12:12 PM  
Oh my word I love your poems they are SO sweet!!!! Your future wife will be one lucky lady :-)

Hey I a little advice I got from a book is along with writing poems and letters and stuff also pray for her! I pray for my future husband and I write him letters and I let him know I'm praying for him in my letters and it's allot of fun! Like you said it's a good way to express your feelings
Clockwork*User is Offline

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01/09/2011 12:15 PM  
Thanks Daughter of the king, I will try to do that too!
"They told me 'Son, you're special... You were born to do great things.' Well you know what...? They were right..." - Jack *Bioschock 1*

I sit in this chair in awe of how you have this effect on me. It's as if I went to a pharmicist and they handed me you. When I smell you I become intoxicated by your narcotic aroma. I am addicted to you as if you were some specialized nicotine. I swallow your gaze like ecstasy. Please sedate me and do what you wish; never cease to be my personal prescribed heroin...

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dc_88keys4christUser is Offline

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01/10/2011 10:28 AM  
Hi Clockwork*, this is my favorite line from your stuff:
I swallow your gaze like ecstasy... never cease to be my personal prescribed heroin...
:)

I do agree with Taylor, though. Try to put God into the picture. You are already His child, so why not put Him in your writing? :) Maybe it's just me, but if I were to receive a letter from my husband that was written years ago, I'd be disappointed if there was no mention of God. If my bf gave me a letter of proposal, I might turn him down if it was full of sweet words about me, but no mention of God. Ugh... that would be pretty tough, I'll admit.
Clockwork*User is Offline

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01/10/2011 10:48 AM  
Glad you like that. I have a few poems on my facebook lol. I'll try to start putting God into my poems more often. I have written some thigns to Him though. I will post them.
"They told me 'Son, you're special... You were born to do great things.' Well you know what...? They were right..." - Jack *Bioschock 1*

I sit in this chair in awe of how you have this effect on me. It's as if I went to a pharmicist and they handed me you. When I smell you I become intoxicated by your narcotic aroma. I am addicted to you as if you were some specialized nicotine. I swallow your gaze like ecstasy. Please sedate me and do what you wish; never cease to be my personal prescribed heroin...

.
dc_88keys4christUser is Offline

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01/10/2011 1:00 PM  
If my bf gave me a letter of proposal, I might turn him down if it was full of sweet words about me, but no mention of God. Ugh... that would be pretty tough, I'll admit.

Except, the thing is, I don't HAVE a bf! Sorry if that confused anyone.
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